Lies and Loss(real version)

[StanFan!]

**NOTE: the other version failed. so here is a different one ~CHAPTER ONE~
-PAIN-
**PAIN WITHOUT LOVE PAIN CANT GET ENOUGH PAIN LIKE IT ROUGH CAUSE I’D RATHER FEEL PAIN THAN NOTHING AT ALL**


The day had just started. Everyone was in the class room and just when Ms. Garrison was about to start her lesson, Dana walked in. She looked bruised, beaten, and was limping. The class fell silent as she trampled over to her seat and sat down. Even Cartman looked concerned. “Um, Dana are you alright?” Ms. Garrison asked. Dana sank into her chair. “I’m fine,” she said in a soft voice. At recess, she was mauled by kids who wanted know what had happened. Dana refused to tell anyone except Kyle, whoms he thought that she could trust the most. She would have told Ivy, but she was home sick that day. “I got beat this morning,” Dana said, she was still speaking softly. “Aw, Dana!” Kyle said. “My mother calls me a failure. She calls me ugly and stupid.” Dana said. “Well, don’t listen to her! She lying. I always thought you were pretty, but I know that Stan thinks your REALLY pretty.” Kyle said and smiled. “What do you mean by that?” Dana asked. “Stan likes you,” Kyle said and got up to go see where Stan was. Dana sat there and thought about things. She thought about all the bad things and good things that have happened to her lately. She counted mostly bad things. Recess was over and all the kids returned to class. The day seemed longer than what it really was. Finally, the bell rang and school was out. Dana’s cel phone rang. She answered it. “Hello?” She said into the phone. It was Kyle, or as he liked to be called, Green Boy. “Hi,” He said.
“Oh, hey,” Dana said. “Whats up with your voice?” Green Boy asked. “uh, soar throat,” Dana said. “Oh ok, well I was just callin to see if I missed anything at school. I just got back from Hawaii. Its so warm there and cold here.” He said. “Nothing really happened.” Dana said. “Ok, well I’ll cya soon,” Green Boy said and hung up the phone. Dana walked up to her house, and stared at it for a while. She was afriad what would happen if she walked in. “Dana, you can come over my house!” Kyle said. “Thanks,” Dana said and smiled. She ran across the street over to Kyle’s house. “So what kind of stuff do you do after school?” Dana asked. “We goof off, and do random stuff,” Kyle said. “We’re lighting cow crap today,” Kyle added. Dana nodded. *This is gonna be a long night* Dana thought.

[Jake, Mkay?]

I like it a lot!!!!!

[StanFan!]

aw thankx jake ;)

[StanFan!]

mmmmmmmmmkay

[Catherine]

I like it. =)

[StanFan!]

ok well i am only warning u
for some reason wen i post, it only shows a ;little part of wat i actually posted
so i might have to post the chapers in parts

[StanFan!]

~CHAPTER TWO~
-Long Road to Ruin-

** LONG ROAD TO RUIN THERE IN YOUR EYES UNDER THE COLD STREET LIGHT. NO TOMORROW NO DEAD END IN SIGHT**

[Jake, Mkay?]

~CHAPTER TWO~
-Long Road to Ruin-** LONG ROAD TO RUIN THERE IN YOUR EYES UNDER THE COLD STREET LIGHT. NO TOMORROW NO DEAD END IN SIGHT** “Wait, whos we?” Dana asked. “Kenny, Stan, and Cartman,” Kyle said. “Cartman?” Dana asked. “Yeah I dont know why, he just comes.” Kyle said and shrugged. There was a knock at the door. “I GOT IT!” Kyle yelled and answered the door. “Hey Dude!” Stan said. “Ok, well I have to pee, be right back!” Kyle said and ran out of the room. “Um, hi Dana,” Stan said shyly. “Hi Stan,” Dana said smiling. There was a long silence. “So, um, hows you and Wendy?” Dana asked. “Not so good.” Stan said. “Aw Why?” Dana asked. “I dont think she likes me anymore.” Stan said. There was another long silence. “hey Guys! I’m back!” Kyle said. “So should we get Kenny and Cartman?” Stan asked. “Not yet, I think we should see how Ivy’s doing,” Kyle said.
VegSyn (4:10:55 PM): Stan and Dana greed. They walked through a couple of yards to get to Ivy’s house. It was gigantic. The three of them knocked on the door. “Oh, why hello Kyle!” Ivy’s mom said. “Hi Mrs. Valmont, is Ivy there?” Kyle asked. “Yes you can come in if you like,” Mrs. Valmont said and went to get Ivy. “Hey guys,” Ivy said. “You don’t look so sick,” Dana said. “I was this morning,” Ivy said. “So can you play?” Stan asked. “Yup!” Ivy said happily. “Ok, now we have to get Cartman and Kenny,” Kyle said. They went up to Cartman’s house and knocked. The door flew open and Cartman ran out screaming. Stan looked inside and was shocked. There, in the center of the room, was the corpse of Liane Cartman. Eric was bawling. Everyone stood there in shock. “WHY GOD?! WHY?!” Cartman screamed.

[StanFan!]

ok, guys, if ur wondering, i got Jake to post it for me because my compiter was acting all shitty again. sorry for the confusion!

[StanFan!]

~Chapter Three~
-DEAD!-
**Have you heard the news that your dead? No one ever had much nice to say I figure no one liked you anyway Oh take me from the hospital bed Wouldnt it be grand? It aint exactly what you planned and wouldnt it be great if we were all dead**

Just then Sandra came up with tears rolling down her cheeks. "You guys!" She screamed running up to them. '"MY PARENTS! THEIR DEAD!" She yelled. Kyle knew something wasnt right. Without a word he ran to his house. He ran up the stairs and looked for his parents. They were no where to be found. Suspecting the worst, Kyle shed a single tear and ran back out to find everyones parents either gone or dead. There was a meeting called in the community center. "What are we gonna do?" Craig asked out loud. Kyle stood at the podium and cleared his throat. "We will try to make things as normal as possible. We will work, run businesses, and make a living. This is the start of the new South Park!" Kyle said. Everyone was quiet. Then Dana ran up to the podium and said, "I have a dream!" Everyone cheered and applaused, but stopped as Dana was going to continue her soeech. "That we can do what Kyle said. If we all work together!" Everyone cheered more. It was settled. South Park would become an organized town, run by kids.

[bridon#1fan]

Nice story StanFan!.

[StanFan!]

HEHE Thanks so much for all your support! :D

[bridon#1fan]

I hope you continue with it. I might make another fanfic sometime.

[StanFan!]

I am gonna continue with it and PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER FANFIC!! ur fanfics are awesom-o!

[StanFan!]

I just realized I made the story WAAAAAAAAAAAAY too serious so, here's th weird and funny i guess, parts.

Chapter Three
Cucumber Song
** I'm a cucumber
I'm a cucumber
I'm a cucumber
I'm a cucumber

I'm a cucumber
I'm a cucumber

...Please don't send me to the mental farm!**

"I volunteer myself to be mayor!" Kyle said. "NO! I wanna be mayor!" Cartman yelled.
"NO ME!"
"NO ME!"
"NO ME!"
"NO ME!"
"SHUT THE HELL UP!" Dana screeched. "PLay rock paper scissors." Ivy said shrugging. "OK! ITS ON!" Cartman said. "BRING IT!" Kyle said.
"Rocl Paper Scissors SHOOT!" Both of them said. "HAH! Paper covers rock!" Cartman said. "WELL ITS BEST OUTTA 3!" Kyle said. "Rock, paper, scissors SHOOT!" Both of them said again. "SCISSORS CUTS PAPER!" Kyle yelled.
"ROCK PAPER SCISSORS SHOOT!" Both of them screamed. "ROCK SMASHES SCISSORS!" KYLE SCREAMED. "I WIN!" "AW GODAMMIT!" Cartman screamed. "UNTIL NEXT TIME!" He ran away. Kyle started jumping and scraeming and howling and having fake seisures.
MEANWHILE ON THE COAST OF HAWAII
"Im sao happy we faked our death!" Mrs. Cartman said. "I know! It gives me so much more me time!" Mrs. Broflovski. "I dunno, I kinda feel wrong about this," Randy said. "Why?!" Sharon said. "Well, their all alone at South Park. And if they do something we'll be responsible so.... OH MY GAWD!! DONUTS!" Randy said aand ran towards the donuts. "I love CRuises," MRs. Cartman said.

[Jake, Mkay?]

Love it!! Continue with it please!

[StanFan!]

Hey thanx, i havent talked to u in a while!!!!!!!!!! ;)

[bridon#1fan]

Coming along very well.

[StanFan!]

Yeah im also working on a star wars fanfic, not that very good though but thanks!! SOOOOOOOO

[Jake, Mkay?]

AWESOME! I was thinking of doing a star wars fanfic but i was too lazy.

[StanFan!]

LOL, thats funny. Yeah my Star Wars fic isnt gonna be that great. I can tell you that.

[StanFan!]

**I have been influenced by a movie I recently watched. I really think you guys will know what movie after I find the song that goes with the chapter.**

you guys should guess!! the hint is that it is a slasher movie and is an ongoing franchise!

[StanFan!]

nevermind, Im just gonna write it now!!



Chapter 5
~Nightmares~

1,2 Freddy's coming for you

3,4 better lock your door

5,6 grab a curcifix

7,8 gonna stay up late

9,10 never sleep again


"OK!! Well since how late it is I guess that we should all go and get some sleep." Kyle said after a 6 hour long conference. "Yeah, Im uber tired!" Dana said and yawned. "Hah, sure, you didnt do anything at all during the meeting!: Bebe said smirking. "NO! I suggested a lot of things!" Dana said.
"Ok, sure, Im leaving.....bye Kyle!" She said and walked out the door. "Hey Ivy, wanna see if Stan and Dana could have a sleep over with us?" Kyle asked Ivy. "Yeah, sounds fun!" Ivy said.
~Later that Night~
Everyone was all set up with their sleeping bags. "This is going to be so much fun! One hour later all of them were asleep. Dana woke up to find evryone gone. It was still dark out and no one was in Kyles house. She walked outside to find the whole town empty. As she walked down the street bebe ran up to her covered in blood. Dana freaked out. It looked as if Bebe was screaming but nothing was coming out of her mouth. Everything from then went in slow motion for Dana. A tall figure came up beside Bebe, and stabbed her somehow with his hand. Bebe fell to the ground. Just then Dana woke up screaming. It had been a nightmare. But it had felt so real. "Dana! Are you ok?" Stan asked. Dana rubbed her head a little bit. "Geeze, I bet you woke up the whole neighborhood!" Kyle said. "Very funny," Dana said sarcastically. "Seriously, is everything ok?" Ivy asked. "Yeah, just had a bad dream, I guess." Dana said. The phone rang. "I got it." Kyle said. He answered the phone. He was on the phone for about 1 minute. "Somethings happened!" Kyle said. "What?" Ivy asked. "Something terrible," Kyle said.

~South Park out skirts~
"Stupid Kyle," Cartman said. "MOOO!" Yelled some homeless guy. "SHUT UP!" Cartman yelled at him. Just then he stopped dead. "Theres an evil prescence in South Park. EVEN EVILER THAN ME!?" He said in disbelief. He turned around and headed for South Park.

[MewMewKyle]

wow. Great story stanfan!

[StanFan!]

scary story! MWAHAHHAHAHAAHHAHA

[bridon#1fan]

I really like it.

[StanFan!]

Chapter Six
-Last Resort-
**Cut my life into peices, this is my last resort! Suffication, no breathing. Dont give a f*ck if I cut my arms bleeding!**

The four of them followed Kyle outside. They ran over to middle of the street where Bebe lay dead. "Woah!" Stan
said. It was so groos Ivy could not look. "Its horrible, who could have done this!" Kyle said loudly. Everyone looked at Dana. "What?! No it wasnt me! I was in bed all night!"
She said. "Are you sure?" Ivy asked. "positive....but the dream. It was like I was here when this happened." Dana said looking down.
"So you did it!" Kyle said. "NO! I saw it happen. I couldnt see the person. All I know is that he has a hat and sharp fingernails, or something on his hands." Dana said. "Your a liar!" Kyle said.
"No I'm not! I'm telling the truth!" Dana said. Kyle walked back to his house, ignoring everything Dana said. Dana went back to her house. No one had belived her. She soon fell asleep again.
"So, no body beleives you? AW how sad," said a taunting voice. "Who is that?" Dana asked. She noticed she was in an old boiler room. She saw something move. Scared, Dana jumped up. "WHO ARE YOU!?" She asked again.
"You should know," The voice said. "Well, I dont! Tell me!" Dana said. "Fine," the voice said. The figure jumped in fron of her. "Freddy's back!" He screamed. Dana woke up that instant. She held her head. "That was scary." She said to herself.
She went downstairs and got herself some coffee.

[StanFan!]

Chapter Seven
-One Step Closer-
**Everything you say to me
Takes me one step closer to the edge
And I'm about to break
I need a little room to breathe
Cause I'm one step closer to the edge
And I'm about to break**


"Stan! Don't tell me you belive her!" Kyle scareamed. "Of course I belive her! She wouldn't kill anyone! Ever!
"How can you be so sure of that?" Kyle asked. "Kyle! What the hell has gotten into you!?" Stan asked. "NOTHING!" Kyle yelled. "Ugh, all this arguing is making me
tired." Dana said, drowsily. "I don't care!" Kyle said. "I was't talking to you!" Dana said. Hours later, Dana finally drifted off to sleep.
-Meanwhile-
"Hey Sharon!" Randy said. "yes dear?"Sharon replied. "Look at this," he said and took out his blackberry cell phone. Itw as at the South Park news where it stated that "Bebe Stevens Murdered"
Randy told her parents but they didn't care, they were having such a great time. "Don't worry about it," Sharon said. "Well I can't when our son may- O MY GAWD! BEEEEEEER!" Randy screamed.
-South Park-
Dana was in the boiler room again. "AW goddammit!" She said and got up. "You know 'Freddy' you look pretty scary." She said sarcastically. "Oh sure, sure I'm not scary!" He replied walking out in front
of her. "Your face isn't scary, just REALLY disgusting!" dana said. "I know, I get that a lot." He said. "So, how did you get to so weird?"
Dana woke up just before he answered.

[StanFan!]

Chapter Eight
-Sharpest Lives-
Give me a shot to remember
And you can take all the pain away from me
A kiss and I will surrender
The sharpest lives are the deadliest to lead
A light to burn all the empires
So bright the sun is ashamed to rise and be
In love with all of these vampires
So you can leave like the sane abandoned me

"Crap!" Dana yelled. "Oh, you finally woke up. Oh joy!" Kyle said meanly. "Alright you know what? Lets just go home and get a goods night sleep. "Ok fine!" Kyle said and left. "Stan? You believe me right?" Dana asked. "I don't know," Stan replied and walked out, leaving Dana by herself. "Ugh, why doesn't anyone belive me?" Dana asked herself. "Because no one has seen me yet." said a familiar voice. "Where are you?" Dana asked. "Inside your head," the voice said. "Why?" Dana asked. The voice completely ignored that question and said, "you know, there is a way of getting me out of the dream world and into the real world." The voice said. "how?" Dana asked. "Just fall asleep and I will explain," the voice said. Dana went to her house, flopped onto her bed, and fell asleep. "Dana?!" Cartman said. "Cartman? Why the hell are you here?" Dana asked. "NO! Why are you here? I just fell asleep. Am I still sleeping?" Cartman said. Freddy jumped down. "AH! WHO THE FUCK IS THAT?" Cartman asked. "Why does nobody know anymore!?" Freddy said. "Your face is all weird," Cartman said. "Shut up," Freddy said. Cartman went silent. "Ok, so how do you get out of the dream world?" Dana asked. "Here pull my finger," Freddy said and held out his finger. "Are you gonna fart?" Dana asked. "NO! Just hold onto it. Amd try to wake up." Freddy said. "um, ok??" Dana said and took hold of Freddy's hand. She woke up and Freddy was standing next to her. "Woa," Dana said.

[bridon#1fan]

I like it so far. Keep going with it.

[Jake, Mkay?]

Sweet! your really good at writing!!!

[StanFan!]

Chapter Nine
-Animal I Have Become-
So what if you can see the darkest side of me?
No one will ever change this animal I have become
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal

[/color] "Finally!" Freddy excalimed. "After all these years, I have returned!"
Dana stood there, dazzed and confused. "Who are you really?" Dana asked. "I am Freddy Krueger." He said. "How did you get
that way?" Dana asked, pointing to his face. "Its a slightly long story," Freddy said. "I'm willing to listen," Dana said. Freddy sighed and took a seat.
"I once lived on 1428 Elm Street, where I worked at a power plant. My wife, Loretta found out something about me. She learned that the cause for those
20 children gone missing wasme. I killed them. She said that she wouldn't tell. But I killed her right infront of my young daughter. I was later charged for those killings.
BUT, thanks to a search warrant not signed correctly, I was released. That stirred up the parents of Elm Street. Later that night, they found me in the boiler room and burned me to death."
Freddy said. "Wow," Dana said. "I'm not through yet. As I was being burned, 3 dream demons approached me and gave me a specail power. The power to...forever. I was able to go into people's dreams and
twists them to my own ends. Any damage done to them in the dream was done to them in real life. Later I was killed though, I was stuck in the boundries of hell. Until I discovered a way of returning. I recruited Jason Voorheese
so he could start killing people, and that they'd blame the murders on me. Soon they did, and I wa sback at full force. But Jason, has a problem with killing, once he starts, he cannot be stopped. So we fought. None of us won. So I made my way back to a different town.
Farther away from Springwood, and Elm Street. South Park." He said. "So you some serial killer guy?!" Cartman screamed. "SHUT UP!" Freddy screamed. "Would you be disturbed if I killed him?" Freddy asked. "No, not really." Dana answered. "Good," Freddy replied and laughed. Cartman screamed and ran away. More like, wobbled away.
Freddy soon caught up and slight Cartman's throat. "Wait, If you kill people who dream about you, why haven't you killed me yet?" Dana asked. "Because I need you," Freddy said. "How?" Dana asked. "Remember how I said I killed my wife infront of my daughter?" Freddy asked. "Yeah.." Dana said. "My daughter, had a daughter......who is you." Freddy said.
"KILLER!" Dana said. "Huh?" Freddy said. "SWEET!" Dana said. "Erm, ok" Freddy said. "Yeah," Dana said. "Ok, now here is how I need your help........." Freddy said.

[StanFan!]

Chapter Ten
-Still Waiting-
So am I still waiting
For this world to stop hating
Can't find a good reason
Can't find hope to believe in

".........Me? Take up killing?" Dana asked. "Just think of it as a new sport.
I Heard you were very athletic!" Freddy said. "Killing?" Dana asked again. "Its so much fun though! Please?" Freddy asks. "UM, I will try it out." Dana said.
"Yes!" Freddy said and got up. "Dana, follow me." He walked down to the basement and went to an old furnace. "See this?" He said pointing to it. "Yeah, I'm not blind!" Dana said. He reached in the furnace and took out an old rag.
It looked like something was rapped in it. Freddy unrapped it and inside it was a glove similar to the one he was wearing. "Wow," Dana said taking the glove. "So there's some South Park council meeting goin on right now?" Freddy asked. "Yes," Dana said. "Perfect." Freddy said.
They set off towards the Community Center. "You'll go in first and be screaming and yelling and scared. Then I wil come in and, yeah." Freddy said. "Ok," Dana said. "So. does everone agree here that Dana was the one that murdered Bebe?" Kyle asked. Dana ran in screaming. "Somebody help me! Please!" She screamed.
"What, what is it?" Kyle asked. "Hes coming." Dana said. "Who?" Kyle asked. "Freddy Krueger." Dana replied. Freddy flew through the glass doors, shattering them. He started laugh and said, "YOUR ALL MY CHILDREN NOW!" Everyone ran except Dana who just stood there and watched. "Dana come on! He gonna kill us!" Stan said. Dana took out the the knife fingured glove and put it on. "Stan, you didn't belive me. You didn't help me when I needed you most. So now, you will pay with your life." Dana said.

[Ammy-Yami]

Wow! That is really good! OMG is Stan going to die? ;o;

[bridon#1fan]

Its good so far.

[StanFan!]

Chapter Eleven
-Holiday-
I beg to dream and differ from the hollow lies
This is the dawning of the rest of our lives
I beg to dream and differ from the hollow lies
This is the dawning of the rest of our lives

This is our lives on holiday


Dana charged for Stan, who dodged just in time.
"Dana, don't do this!" Stan said. "And why not?" Dana asked. "Its not like you, why are you doing this?" Stan screamed.
"Because I have found a 'more fun' hobbie than spending my time with you! Its a waste!" Dana replied.
"And what 'hobbie' is that?" Stan asked. "Killing!" Dana answered, with an evil grin. "Your killing people, just because they didn't belive you, that absurd!" Stan screamed.
"Yes, and look whats happened! Plus it wasn't just Kyle, it was you too!!" Dana screeched. "But, I still don't understand," Stan muttered. "Of course you don't!
Your not as bright as you look!" Dana said. "Dana, look what Freddy has done to you. This isn't the real you, and I miss the nice, funny and caring you." He said. "Hah, I'm still funny,
in a way. And that Dana will never come back!! So get used to it." Dana sneered. "Hes only using you," Stan said. Dana made a face," what?"
Stan sighed, "He used you, I know what happened. He used you to get out of the dream world. He will probally kill you too." "He wouldn't do that to me," Dana said. "How do you know that? He killed over twenty kids before he was burned. He's probally tricked people before. Face the facts!" Stan replied. "Your lying!" Dana screamed. "I have never been more serious in my life." Stan said. "Dana please, killing me won't make you feel any better, please." Stan said softly. Dana face lightened but quickly changed to a very pissed off face. She turned around. "FREDDY!"

[StanFan!]

Chapter Twelve
-In the End-
I tried so hard
And got so far
But in the end
It doesn't even matter
I had to fall
To lose it all
But in the end
It doesn't even matter

"Yeah what is it?" Freddy asked, as he was wrestling with Craig.
"I DONT WANNA DIE!" Craig screamed. "Well too bad!" Freddy answered and threw him into a wall. He threw a sharp pipe and Craig which penetrated his back.
"Ok, yeah Dana?" Freddy asked. "Are you using me?" She asked. Freddy paused for a second. "W-ell, erm, n-no, I'm not. No! I would never ever do that!" Freddy said. "Your lying, aren't you?"
Dana said. Freddy started to stutter. "I am not!" Dana looked at the ground. "I thought I could trust you.." She said. Freddy laughed. "Well, I guess you can't!" Dana's face darkened. "FUCK YOU!" She yelled.
Dana slashed Freddy in the back. He kicked Dana in stomach, leaving her breathless. He punched her in the face and she went flying. "You asshole!" Stan screamed, picked up a chair, and threw it at Freddy. "Aw! How sweet," Freddy said. "SHUT THE HELL UP!"
Dana yelled. Just then, Kenny smashed a wrecking ball through the building and hit Freddy. Freddy was squashed and his guts were all over the floor. "AHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Dana screamed. She was in her bed. A dream? She thought, it was so real. "Dana?!" Her mom yelled. It was so loud Dana fell out of bed. She was
face to face with a bloody knife-glove.
THE END

[StanDaMan]

Great story. I wish I was that talented...(no really I suck at Fanfic)

[bridon#1fan]

It's really good.

[KyleLover]

great story!

[StanFan!]

oh wow i remember this....i was thinking about making another one but not as freaky as this one...probably more on the funny side :P